Treatment 3rd Draft

This will hopefully be the final draft of my treatment, there have had to be some changes to the storyline, due to issues with my original story.

Logline

The objective and overall storyline for my music video is to show a man who was about to go to work but instead he decides to do his own thing and instead of going to work, he scraps work and speaks the truth about current affairs that are going on in society today.

Plot

At the beginning of the music video, the main character will be sat on the train, bored, melancholy and miserable. He will breathe a big sigh and as he does this the song will appear to get louder and as a result, the music video will begin with the emotion of sadness and annoyance. The protagonist then leaves the train and the station generally. After this, there will be a short cut to the protagonist walking through the streets and will be lip syncing the words to the song. As the song goes on, there is a another singer in the song (Damian Lemar Hudson). Who sings some notes, while he is doing this in the song, the protagonist of my music video will be on a skyscraper in some conventional Hip-Hop clothing. This will show him happy, confident and content. The transformation of the music video will exclaim to him what the song did to so many people through the words that were said throughout. From the start of the song where the main character is all alone and upset to the end, where he is confident and basically saying "Look at me now!".

Media Language

Throughout the music video, the media language for the majority of the shots will be tracking shots while the protagonist is lip syncing to the camera. However, at the beginning of the music video, there will be solely a medium close up. Furthermore, at the end of the music video will be an orbital shot of the protagonist with all his confidence glowing off him.